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Farewell (3-5-3 haiku)

 
Dusk has come
goodbye in your eyes
dreams begin
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 49 reviews.
Jennifer Lantry 9 months ago
I really like this!
subhojit kar More than 1 year ago
smart and elegant
Bonzell Joins, Jr. 4 months ago
good form
Thopalli Venkat Ramamurthy More than 1 year ago
Should be expanded
anish kumar More than 1 year ago
a three liner with a great meaning behind... good job
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
Franba Ciscon Ampermou More than 1 year ago
Like the deep thoughts its lead me.
Aaron Mallory More than 1 year ago
All the times I had to reply to a goodbye before its time...
Bev Piercy More than 1 year ago
Now I am tempted to attempt writing in this style
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Good one ending in positive note..
Cocoa Shawnee/ Imperfect Poetess More than 1 year ago
Good Job...
Stephanie Delacour More than 1 year ago
Short and beautifully written.
Deakin McGinn More than 1 year ago
brilllliant
Mahi Pant More than 1 year ago
+ve ending!
Nadia Ziad More than 1 year ago
Well structured, short but sweet.
Miguel Brooks 5 days ago
Speaks so much yet in so little.
Rejaul Mondal 4 days ago
Nothing is permanent. When the Sun sets, the Moon starts shining! Deep! Please review my poems also. Thank you!
Lorenzoe Espinosa 9 days ago
Short but to the point
Deryll Burkhead More than 1 year ago
I second and third that.
Cyn Balunas More than 1 year ago
Keep up the great haikus.
Ellen Wolfson More than 1 year ago
It makes me want to know more!
Bharathy Easwar More than 1 year ago
Short and sweet
Pls check out my poems too
Dimut 2u More than 1 year ago
i like this poem.
Sri Nagastram More than 1 year ago
thumbs up
TJ Bester More than 1 year ago
like the style
sonia crt 9 months ago
nice
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