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Farewell (3-5-3 haiku)

 
Dusk has come
goodbye in your eyes
dreams begin
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 43 reviews.
Jennifer Lantry 5 months ago
I really like this!
Rubein Geterminah 6 months ago
The comparison between the first and the third line is clear.
subhojit kar More than 1 year ago
smart and elegant
John Cravens Sr. More than 1 year ago
Great job!
Shama Javkar More than 1 year ago
:) :) :)
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
sharon Talty More than 1 year ago
This poem compares nature,and love.
ryan wart More than 1 year ago
yes
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thank You
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Good one ending in positive note..
Deakin McGinn More than 1 year ago
brilllliant
Bev Piercy More than 1 year ago
Now I am tempted to attempt writing in this style
Franba Ciscon Ampermou More than 1 year ago
Like the deep thoughts its lead me.
anish kumar More than 1 year ago
a three liner with a great meaning behind... good job
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
Thanks :)
Aaron Mallory More than 1 year ago
All the times I had to reply to a goodbye before its time...
Cocoa Shawnee/ Imperfect Poetess More than 1 year ago
Good Job...
Stephanie Delacour More than 1 year ago
Short and beautifully written.
Deryll Burkhead More than 1 year ago
I second and third that.
Mahi Pant More than 1 year ago
+ve ending!
Sri Nagastram More than 1 year ago
thumbs up
sonia crt 5 months ago
nice
Cyn Balunas More than 1 year ago
Keep up the great haikus.
Ellen Wolfson 11 months ago
It makes me want to know more!
Bharathy Easwar More than 1 year ago
Short and sweet
Pls check out my poems too
Dimut 2u More than 1 year ago
i like this poem.
TJ Bester More than 1 year ago
like the style
Nadia Ziad 11 months ago
Well structured, short but sweet.
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