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# 526 States of Emotion

Sometimes I wish I was more cerebral
Instead of going on my emotions,
Often being quite fortuitous
Without the thought up potions.
\Doldrums come more frequently
When I'm feeling put down
Wishing for a state of jollity
It's best to chase away a frown.
I'm covetous of others' stalwartness
When things are not quite as they should.
I sure wish that I could promenade
Through life's measure being understood
And patience sometimes I seem to lack
Arrogating past the stumbling blocks
Sometimes with much ballyhoo
Oh! if only I could push the time on clocks!

(c) 1999 by Jean E. Gorney
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Jean Gorney More than 1 year ago
We all have different emotions at different times.  Sometimes it is interesting to think about them and realize them in yourself. This poem was published in my gift book called "Think in New Words" which I wrote to encourage myself not to get stuck in a rut of same words. Rhyming poetry is more challenging that way.
# 526 States of Emotion, by Jean Gorney 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 44 reviews.
Anna Aitken More than 1 year ago
This piece could have  been  written about me just now. It's a very visual peice I can relate to.

P.s I hope you don't think I'm been cheeky hi jacking your work to introduce myself as I am just new to this and  would real vaule some advice. You seem to know wha tyou are talking about. Any and al help would be most welcomed. Thank you Anna.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Jean Gorney 19 days ago
I write from my heart and my life experiences. I'm 76 so have many experiences. I don't like to just do what is popular. You are an inspiration to me. Keep writing!! I can't tell you how much I have improved over the years.
Murwyn More than 1 year ago
you make me smile for the truth and irony in your lovely peom....keep writing and upbeating....
Martha Michels More than 1 year ago
Love your poem
Jorge Bravo More than 1 year ago
:)
Diana Zulaica More than 1 year ago
Awesome work
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
Sometimes I wish I was more cerebral 
Instead of  just going on my emotions, 
Often being found just quite fortuitous 
Without the thought up of much potions. 
Doldrums come in more and frequently 
When  I at times feel I am just put down 
Wishing always  for a better state of jollity 
With It's best to chase away all ill  frowns. 
I'm covetous of others' and their stalwarts  
When things are not quite as they should. 
I just wish I could more like a promenade 
Through life's measure being understood 
Sometimes I seem to lack patience much
Arrogating past and  the stumbling blocks 
Sometimes felt  with too much ballyhoo 
Oh! if only I could push the time on clocks! 
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Yolanda Jones More than 1 year ago
great
Earth Lover More than 1 year ago
...and patience sometimes I seem to lack arrogating past the stumbling blocks...aww, I feel for you! :)
KISHOR KUMAR MISHRA More than 1 year ago
A very good poem.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
CLINT DAVIS More than 1 year ago
Makes you think about decisions you make and how they affect you! 
Luckson Mupakamiso More than 1 year ago
good write 
sariya ahmed 3 months ago
Beautiful poem 
Stella W More than 1 year ago
great write--  !!
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Jan Small More than 1 year ago
Very striking
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Nicholas Goffredo More than 1 year ago
I too am often envious of those who are seemingly stoic. I guess that's what makes us writers though. Your diction is impeccable and takes this work to another level. Thoroughly enjoyed your candor.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Tenzin Ignyen More than 1 year ago
very nice
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Anita Winston More than 1 year ago
Very beautiful and heart felt keep up the good work 
Shobha Raman More than 1 year ago
Good
Ariadne Sousa More than 1 year ago
This was wonderful. It seems that we could all use some emotion instead of apathy in our lives.
Rubein Geterminah 11 months ago
How we feel about situations in life matter.
And our responses are what we later regret or appreciation.
But I can better handle my through writing; which most do
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Loved the poetic expression...
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Melissa Bates More than 1 year ago
Very nice and a poignant look at the human condition.
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
Deakin McGinn More than 1 year ago
cool ride
Joyce Anthappen More than 1 year ago
NICE
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
well done
Mic Cinani More than 1 year ago
Nice
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