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Journys end

Splash2 by louie B
Set out to find a stone
journeys end far from home.
Stares with bewildering eyes.
fleeted feelings of a solar storm on fire.
dragged by the heels its desire...
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Journys end, by louie B 3.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 18 reviews.
Amy Luxon More than 1 year ago
love it 
CLINT More than 1 year ago
Really liked it
Jerry Stiles More than 1 year ago
Great poem,,short but powerful..
Joe Topich 12 months ago
Short but meaningful
sonia crt 10 months ago
Suzanne Wells Villafuentes 11 months ago
The corner stone is my rock
darren de leon 12 months ago
nice piece
Jerad Garcia 8 months ago
Short but heart felt
Jonnise Swift 3 months ago
I love it
Steven Ernest Lee Cummings More than 1 year ago
Nadia Ziad More than 1 year ago
Megan H 4 months ago
Simple and nice
Misty Simon 4 months ago
Very good you should add to it
Branden Hurst 11 months ago
I appreciate the lyrical rhyming and assonance of each line but I feel it's very subjective - it could be about literally anything. This is not necessarily a bad thing but you sound like a 13yr old just chucked some words together so that they rhyme I mean "Solar storm on fire" - you just wanted to have assonance with "eyes" but the number of syllables is wrong. Also your punctuation is slightly off - you have a run on line at the start but are you saying the journey is made of stone? Or are you saying that you are on a journey to find a metaphorical stone? hmmm. For these reasons I give it a 2 star.
phillip issac 11 months ago
Alina Stoica 7 months ago
could make up for a song lyrics
Bonzell Joins, Jr. 5 months ago
Didnt understand it
hate you More than 1 year ago
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