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Waiting so sitting

What a beautiful hair !so sweet what a gain for always all so playing the musical pipe great ?
A court yard so wonderful amazing nice waiting for always and so looking looking ?
For the same so willing and always thursty and so having a wonderful vehicle so to note ?
For telling so seen and to say what a great friendship everything so unseen nothing to run and seen a crown ?
For what so came and so making to stay for coming and so stay anything so seen made immoral ?
So harping so much to say oh the great land so willing oh great for what to tell all nice?
Seeing everything so magestic and so calm and quiete not seen anything not telling so wonderful ?
For what anything so to taking taking unknown so long so long and oh telling and witing so sitting ?
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ALEN JOSHY 4 months ago
Hi sir, plz review my poem. I'm from Kerala and this is my first attempt.
http://poetry.com/poems/1749938-An-ode-to-the-difficult-times-ahead-climate-change-drought-depletion-of-resources-migrations-distrust-among-nations-
Waiting so sitting , by William John 4.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Jude Garnett 5 days ago
I enjoyed the imagery within this piece
Diane P Tabor 23 days ago
An inner peace with oneself
Sharon Lofthouse 10 days ago
Loved the way you set a scene--it could be you looking in a mirror or looking on--a mystery.  Some irony here--the great land not so great?  Can you give us a hint what the crown is about?  My suggestion:  Have a native English speaker who appreciates your poetic style help you proofread it. No one who would curb your vision, but could help you spell the words right, etc.
ALEN JOSHY 4 months ago
Hi sir, plz review my poem. I'm from Kerala and this is my first attempt.
http://poetry.com/poems/1749938-An-ode-to-the-difficult-times-ahead-climate-change-drought-depletion-of-resources-migrations-distrust-among-nations-

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