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Pain

Pain

My gloomy cloud
Showered sad rain
Along with hail stones
Dropped the pain

The stunned pain
Took swings
She wished
She could have wings

With melancholic wings
She soared high
She got hurt
And heaved a sigh

On the way
She met the grief
And told it
Her painful journey in brief

Having listened to
The journey of pain
The grief gasped
Again and again!!
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Pain, by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Endurance Ajodo 4 months ago
This no doubt is a masterly piece. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
The journey of pain made the grief gasp.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Wish you a happy read!
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Happy Today. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
I  appreciate the support of my readers. 
Sonja Carnes 4 months ago
This is magnificent!
Amazing flow, excellent word choice
Great imagery, Kudos my friend!
My hat is off to this poem
Your pen is mightier than any 
Sword! 
Have a blessed day.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Your wonderful comments mean a lot to me. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
I value your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
So nice and kind of you.!
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Blessing be with you and yours.. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Have a blissful day!!
Andreas Simic 4 months ago
Cute little write and enjoyable read. Thank you. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Sammy okoyo 4 months ago
Good
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review!
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
V. Paul Hall 4 months ago
A fresh and different way of speaking about pain.  original.
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 4 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
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