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My Foul

My Foul

In my neighbour's hand
Always glittering gold
And my hand
Very often numb and cold

My mind struck
With thought bold
Oh!God! I wonder if yours
Blessing also sold

Soon I realized
My blunder and foul
I was adoring stone of idol
And not the great soul !!!
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My Foul , by Subhashchandra Adhav 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 7 reviews.
Sonja Carnes 13 days ago
This is exquisite work, Subhashchandra! 
Amazing work! You made me smile!
Interesting and Intriguing work here!
Love this! 
Have a blessed day, my friend!
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks so kindly Sonjà for your amazing review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
So nice and kind of you. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
I value your encouraging comments 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
I so appreciate your kind and complimentary words. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Blessing be upon you and yours. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Stay blessed Sonja!
Subhashchandra Adhav 13 days ago
I was adoring stone of idol 
And not the great soul!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Wish you a happy read. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Happy Today!
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
I appreciate the support of my readers. 
Sonia Crt 13 days ago
i was adoring stone of idol..
excellent work
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
I value your encouraging comments. 
Uma Natarajan 13 days ago
Stone idol with greater soul Great poem
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Stella W 13 days ago

Well written Adhav...!!!The marvel of poetry !!!


Stella W 13 days ago
Have a great day
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Great many thanks Dear Stella for such a fascinating review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
So nice and kind of you. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
I  so appreciate your kind and valued words. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Blessing be upon you. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Stay blessed Stella!
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Have a splendid day!
Subhashchandra Adhav 12 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your heartfelt support. 
Hassen Gara 11 days ago
Great poem .Please review my poem http://poetry.com/poems/1767713-MY-MOTIVATION.Thanks
Maya Biya 4 days ago
Loving your poetry. 
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