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My Foul

My Foul

In my neighbour's hand
Always glittering gold
And my hand
Very often numb and cold

My mind struck
With thought bold
Oh!God! I wonder if yours
Blessing also sold

Soon I realized
My blunder and foul
I was adoring stone of idol
And not the great soul !!!
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My Foul , by Subhashchandra Adhav 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 7 reviews.
Stella W 6 months ago

Well written Adhav...!!!The marvel of poetry !!!


Stella W 6 months ago
Have a great day
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Great many thanks Dear Stella for such a fascinating review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
So nice and kind of you. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I  so appreciate your kind and valued words. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Blessing be upon you. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Stay blessed Stella!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Have a splendid day!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your heartfelt support. 
Sonia Crt 6 months ago
i was adoring stone of idol..
excellent work
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I value your encouraging comments. 
Uma Natarajan 6 months ago
Stone idol with greater soul Great poem
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Sonja Carnes 6 months ago
This is exquisite work, Subhashchandra! 
Amazing work! You made me smile!
Interesting and Intriguing work here!
Love this! 
Have a blessed day, my friend!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly Sonjà for your amazing review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
So nice and kind of you. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I value your encouraging comments 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I so appreciate your kind and complimentary words. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Blessing be upon you and yours. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Stay blessed Sonja!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I was adoring stone of idol 
And not the great soul!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Wish you a happy read. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Happy Today!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I appreciate the support of my readers. 
Hassen Gara 5 months ago
Great poem .Please review my poem http://poetry.com/poems/1767713-MY-MOTIVATION.Thanks
Maya Biya 5 months ago
Loving your poetry. 
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