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Disloyalty

Blood drops spread on floor
Spying went on them, there roar
Brides slash her vane,
Seems she stands on death door
 
Meanwhile the ambulance appeared
they took her infirmary, she wept more
She said disloyal beloved’s insurgency 
the cause of my destroyed planet, sure?
 
he promised to built our love cottage
with loyalty and sincerity as pure
 Honeys would be our endearment
We will be gone on moon’s tour,
 
Smashed out all dreams as he gave-up
He chosen someone for me sour,
My life is misery, hurting, crestfallen
Hence I chosen the way of death door 


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Hamada Makbool More than 1 year ago
good job
Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 15 reviews.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Well written, I liked it.
Shir Hanochi More than 1 year ago
Good
Zafar Iqbal More than 1 year ago
Thanks
izaescritora More than 1 year ago
i would like to write about your poem but your poem told to me... i think the same and i only can give a hug
Zafar Iqbal More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot
Lisa Hine More than 1 year ago
I loved the topic and you wrote it like it came write from your heart
Christina Peskowa More than 1 year ago
very touching!
Joe Kelly More than 1 year ago
like
Gajanan Mishra More than 1 year ago
Thanks poet negatively you have touched the truth . Death is not the solution .
Ahmad Imtiyaz More than 1 year ago
Sometimes we fall in love with death . it's fact.
Jasmine Romanov 9 months ago
Full of emotion. Thought provoking
Saroj Khan More than 1 year ago
nice
Ashok Babu More than 1 year ago
ignoring the grammatical errors, i like you work...written with lot of passion pls review http://www.poetry.com/poems/467619-The-Skeletons-in-My-cupboard-
Ayubkhan U More than 1 year ago
nice
Satya Pattnaik More than 1 year ago
Reflections of reality .
Nick Adegwe-Oshomah More than 1 year ago
Well done
CLINT 11 months ago
I liked it
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