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Unemployment

 
Fate examination remains in whole life
 
Hard those last past eight months in life
 
Due to belong poor tertiary I was working
 
Abroad, return R&R but don’t availability
 
Of visa so life is going suck,
 
rock on if you Have job   
 
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Poetry.com 3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 16 reviews.
Mae Croft 8 months ago
I love it thank you
Janice Brown More than 1 year ago
Keep searching
Coy Day More than 1 year ago
like
Ritesh Singh More than 1 year ago
nice 
Mahipat Singh More than 1 year ago
All lines  are  composed very well, Good Luck !
Nicholas Regan More than 1 year ago
A little too hard to follow, but could be expanded on.
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
Check this work of mine and give your thoughts to it
http://www.poetry.com/poems/1606781-The-Window
S. Subhashini More than 1 year ago
All the best
Yudi Shah More than 1 year ago
nyc
Diane P Tabor More than 1 year ago
life is not easy, keep going and believe
Diana Sitnic More than 1 year ago
bravo wow
Victor Brilliant More than 1 year ago
Needs flow
Jim Mearns More than 1 year ago
This will be much stronger of a poem if you place a verb in where it will help the poem flow better and give it power.
John Mcmahon More than 1 year ago
I like the idea, but I do think it needs a little bit of work, so it really stands out

Carl Semien More than 1 year ago
Keep up the confidence.....can you review my new poems "A Prosperous Mind" etc...... your reviews are very much appreciated
Andrew Allan 5 months ago
Please read some poetry. Consider the work of Keats, Byron, Wordsworth, Wilfred Owen, Seigfreid Sassoon or Norman MacCaig. Read MacCaig's poem Assisi or Memorial. A collection of non-related words jumbled together does not a poem make.
Robert Rawson 3 months ago
its have no meaning  in it
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